I Saved My Money to Bank
I saved my money in the Bank because bank is a good place to saved our money. Our money will be safety if we save in the Bank because the bank gives guarante to our money. The other advantages from saved money in the bank are very easy, fast, pleasant and safe. And then the bank gives as reward in case kupon.
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La Hamidi (A1D2 07 154)
Harsina Harimu (A1D2 07 147)
Suryadi Pratama (A1D2 07 151)
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One think that you guys should remember, don't put a word with a capital letter, while it doesn't have to add.
Ex: my money in the 'Bank'.
In this case, we shouldn't give a capital letter on it, because the word 'Bank' isn't follow by the name of the bank, if it is "Mandiri Bank", it is right, because the following name of the bank is in the sentence.
Then, don't put a sentence like this,
Our money will be "safety".
Safety is a noun, while what you guys means perhaps "safe" or an adjective..
That's all,,
Thanks
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