My Sister
My sister is a nurse in the Abunawas’s hospital. She go to the hospital at 07.00 a.m. o’clock and went home at 08.00 p.m. o’clock. But sometimes she had spend the night in the hospital, maybe because many patients or maybe it’s her schedule. In there, she keeps and take care the patients. Sometimes she feel bored, but she have to do it because that’s is the conquence of her job.
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Wa Ode Farisaty (A1D2 07 146)
Wa Ode Rosmala Nita (A1D2 06 138)
Andi Ayu Sulfiani. S (A1D2 07 129)
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Well, it is a good writing, altough there are some mistakes you guys made. Like 'she go', it should be 'she goes' or "she 'keeps' and 'take care' the..." keep & take care is equal. Both of them are verb. So, please add 'takes care'. Besides, a story/writing will be better if we put the same tenses in a paragraph, so the reader won't confuse when they reading the writing.
`Thanks
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